You caught the tooth fairy,
you got your wish.
You must kill the source
to accomplish this.
Don’t be confused about
what you have done.
Your daughter is dust,
she’s gone.
You caught the tooth fairy,
you got your wish.
You must kill the source
to accomplish this.
Don’t be confused about
what you have done.
Your daughter is dust,
she’s gone.
Poor daughter, and mother! Who knew the fairy tooth should not be caught. Great take on the prompt!
Thank you for the feedback! I really enjoyed you take as well.
🙂
I wonder if it’s the father or mother who caught the tooth fairy. Either way, terrible consequence!
Perhaps it was a collaborative effort. Thanks for the comment.
Wondering why he wanted to catch hold of the tooth fairy in the first place! Creepy tale..
This is one that I wish I would have came up with for a longer piece. There was a lot more to tell. Thanks for the comment.
I had always ever thought of the tooth fairy as being a Tinkerbell sort of character, this one is definitely more Grimm’s Fairy Tale-ish, which is way better. Cool.
The context of your word use is very close to the forbidden use of the word, per the instructions of the challenge. Maybe.
This is delightful, even if the ending isn’t.
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks
Leave the mythical creatures to do their magical duties.
That sounds like good advice!
You mess with the tooth fairy, you’re gonna pay for it. Good one!
Pay for it dearly in this case. Thanks for the comment.
It is better not to get too much involved in the world of fantastical creatures. Interesting take on the prompt!
Thank you.
Oh my, never tussle with the Guardians…every parent knows that.
I loved this, it was so creative and written so well.
Thank you very much!
See, you spoil the magic, who knows what the result will be! An intriguing take on the prompt.
Thank you.
Don’t mess with the Fae…great piece 🙂
Thanks
As Kir said, we parents all know that our children’s bedrooms are sacred ground so, to be invited in, as Tooth Fairies are, is a sign of trust and respect. To trap an invited guest, in such a special locale, can only end up going horribly wrong…….as you so duly noted. Good take on the prompt, Lewis.
I’m never gonna think of the tooth fairy the same way again! D:
Such a fun way to use the prompt.
This is almost sinister. Great work.
Catching fairies always ends in tears. Important reminder 😉
Chilling… never mess with fairies
I’m a little bitter at the tooth fairy. She still owes me money. So, if I catch her I’m going to shake my money plus 30 some years of interest out of her.
I enjoyed your take on the prompt. A bit creepy and I like creepy. 🙂
I always knew those tooth faeries were bad news! What other kind of creepy weirdo wants to break into your house to go around collecting bone fragments in the middle of the night?!
Who ever caught her, they know now that Magic comes at a price. Nicely done!
Creeeeepy! And very creative. Nice job.