Copyright -Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
“Isn’t it supposed to be a pearly gate?” Max asked as they approached the door.
“Oh, now you know everything about this journey.” his guardian angel replied; he had become annoyed with Max’s attitude. “Just open the door.”
“Okay,” Max replied, tugging at the door. “Lucifer,” Max yelled with dismay, “But, But…”
“Gabr-, Gab-,” the guardian angel was laughing so hard he couldn’t get the words out. “Gabriel,” he said as the devilish figure tuned into an angel. “Did you see the look on his face?”
“So, I’m not going to hell?”
“Who knows, we still have to get you to judgment.“
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Lewis Cave 
I never thought of angels as having such a wicked sense of humour 😉
Who knew, I guess they are jokesters, at least in my mind.
Great one! Full stop there, or semi colon I think. ‘angel replied, he had’
Thank you! I have made the adjustment.
Dear Lewis,
This is so reminiscent of an old Twilight Zone. More than one, actually. Thanks for the fun ride.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochell, and thank you for the photo.
Those elusive Pearly Gates, well done good take on the prompt. You have two ‘angles’ when you meant two ‘angels’…
What more judgement? I guess even angels need to have some fun.
Ha ha. Fantastic.. 🙂
Thank you! It seems I’m having a rough editing day.
Ya I guess they would. Why not mess with a few humans that have a bad attitude.
Very humoress and creative take on the prompt. I always suspected guardian angels had a sense of humor. Good one.
I certainly hope they do, if not I might have a rough trip.
Haha this is cute and funny. Always thought Gabriel was the chief prankster among angels though… guess the others like their jokes too1 😀
I don’t see why they can’t all play a joke every once and a while.
Lewis,
Man, those angels are merciless. 🙂 Of course, Part 2 will probably show they were devils all along, just messing with his mind. Nice job.
-David
I guess you never know. Ol Lucifer can be a tricky devil.
It’s boring in the afterlife. You have to get your kicks where you can. Loved this one!
It’s boring in the afterlife. You have to get your kicks where you can. Loved this one!
Hahaa nice one!
Fantastic! 🙂 Very cute.
Funny one, Lewis. Heavenly angels with a devilish sense of humor, eh? I wonder whether something like, “Gabr–, Gab–” might better show that the words are unfinished. I was trying to figure out what “Gabr” and “Gab” were.
janet
I certainly think they will have a devilish sense of humor. Thanks for the suggestion, I was trying to think of a way to articulate this and I was drawing a blank. I think your way will work well. Thanks again
I know of some other stories where Gabriel is a dick. Awesome job.
HaHaHaHa!!!!! Really funny and disconcerting at the same time! Loved it. 🙂
I sure enjoyed your take on the prompt. Guardian Angel is messing with the kid. Thanks for the neat story! Nan
I enjoyed your story, Lewis. It was a totally unexpected take on the prompt. Good one.
A joking Angel.. really cruel.. but also heaven’s guard can be bored at last.
lol! that was horribly mean! 🙂
This is the only humorous take on the photo thus far. Thank you for making me smile 🙂
You sure that’s not Loki and Puck? Trickters both.
That Gabe has a wicked sense of humor.
Excellent! This made me laugh out loud 😀
A cute take,loved it:-)